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Re: House
Hi there, callmelola! I'm Conrad, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, I really liked this poem. It tells a nice little story, in my opinion. You don't ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Relief -- Excerpts from Hel's Gate
Hi there Vanadis! I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. Sorry I couldn't get to this sooner. School had me bogged down earlier this week. But, I am ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Brock
Hi there, becki! I'm stopping by to review this, since you gave me the link and everything. :P So, I rather like this little piece. While it doesn't have much ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Mother Goose Grim
She found herself on a far western shore, with the ocean before her; like a giant that pretends to slumber, until it wishes to ravish the town. There was no ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: YWS Has An Online Book Store
A Ring of Endless Light by Madeline L'Engle, for the handpicked section. And, cool beans for a comment on the idea as a whole!
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Storming a Castle
Well, first off, that many people are not going to be 'storming' a castle, especially if only one of them is an adult. Storming involves taking something by force. What ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: A Moment Of Clarity
Hi there, mizz-iceberg. I'm Conrad, and I'll be reviewing this today. So, I like what you're doing here. This nice, long, free verse narrative poem is right up my alley. ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: Sniper rifles and sharpshooting...
That's just a remark on the "effectiveness" of your anti-gun laws.
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Sniper rifles and sharpshooting...
Guns and the knowledge of them are not scary things. A gun is a simple tool. Proper usage of a tool does not a frightening person make. Improper usage of ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Sniper rifles and sharpshooting...
Diazepam is actually pretty good for the steadying. First off, this person is going to have to know about gun safety inside and out. Any kind of sharpshooter would have ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: The Journeyman's Jewel
Once there was a journeyman who wandered the roads near Halifax, doing the odd work of the wives whose husbands were at sea. He was a lean sort, yet had ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: what's your song?
Sounds fun. :)
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: Comment Number One
Are we all not yet the horrid ones with fits of neurosis and melodrama? Stumbling about with our heads full of ideas of our own self worth and individuality, we ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Aliens pt. 1 (And The LORD Spake Unto Abraham)
Hi there, Kylan. Giving this a critique, as per your request. So, the only thing I can see here that really bugs me is that I couldn't really see just ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Daybreak
Hi there, Aristotle. I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I really like this poem. It's simple and short, yet is a lovely little thing; beautiful, yet ...
Feb 11, 2010
